Search found 774 matches

by Rider
Mon Mar 04, 2013 9:50 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Sexy Thai Girls in the Shopping Mall with a difference! :)
Replies: 9
Views: 2705

Sexy Thai Girls in the Shopping Mall with a difference! :)

In the right place at the right time... A charged battery for my camera, an empty 32 gig memory chip and a parade of Thai babes on the stage before me, I'll let the vid do the talking... These girls aren't professional, just in the big city to find their fortune and hopefully not get burnt in the pr...
by Rider
Sat Feb 23, 2013 3:40 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

Interesting, I wonder if you are going to mention the much wonder-medicine of... Collodial Silver! :)

I have also dropped the price a bit as well.

It is now $5 in price instead of $5.99.
by Rider
Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:16 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

Marketing is not my strong-point. I've got it on a few forums elsewhere and on a website. Emailing it around a bit, that sort of thing...

www.hyperborearising.com

I'm intrigued Mr Plum, what works of literature are you working on??
by Rider
Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:46 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

Ok, just republished the book, now it's got the amended bits on it it will be much better than before. :)
by Rider
Sat Feb 16, 2013 12:27 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

Thanks for the buzz and critique folks. Mr Plum, would you like to become my unofficial Editor-In-Chief? :) Your fine-tuning is appreciated. I can give you a shout-out in the Acknowledgements page. I've just amended the errors in the opening chapters and about to upload them into a second edition up...
by Rider
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:56 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

MrPlum wrote:
Rider wrote:I've managed to get a book published on Amazon Kindle :)
Congratulations. I'm stuck half way on a book of my own... keep forgetting what I have already written!
What's your book about? Get posting it on here! :)
by Rider
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:54 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

I would recommend you invest in the services of a professional editor or reviewer since the section you posted contains a number of basic grammatical errors and unusual sentence construction that don't make it an easy read. I agree, and however much people say that these things don't matter so much...
by Rider
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:46 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

I would just like to make a small observation as well. I couldn't comment on the actual content as I don't read science fiction/fantasy but I think you need to look at the pricing of your book. I'm a regular shopper on Amazon Kindle and for around the sort of money that you're asking, you can buy s...
by Rider
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:43 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

Correction. Amazon shows $7.99. Hope you don't mind some observations. I am not a professional but can also see the spelling and grammar have too many errors. It is critical to get both right. Can you be a bit specific, I've run the thing through multiple checkers and had it proof-read as well. On ...
by Rider
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:33 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

My job involves a good deal of creative writing for commerce as well as editing the work of others, however, and I would recommend you invest in the services of a professional editor or reviewer since the section you posted contains a number of basic grammatical errors and unusual sentence construc...
by Rider
Wed Feb 13, 2013 1:31 pm
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Re: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

I've managed to get a book published on Amazon Kindle :) Congratulations. I'm stuck half way on a book of my own... keep forgetting what I have already written! Tell us more. How long did it take you? How much of the $5.99 do you get to keep and how easy was the process? Did you use a third party o...
by Rider
Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:20 am
Forum: Motoring
Topic: Renew driving Licence
Replies: 77
Views: 6524

Re: Renew driving Licence

The original one was with a non-immigrant visa (6 years ago), but a renewal can be done with a tourist visa so you can be 'grandfathered-in'. Also my DL was expired by about 6 months as well so technically it wasn't really a renewal per-sa but from scratch again. So it is possible from scratch also....
by Rider
Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:59 am
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'

I've managed to get a book published on Amazon Kindle :) http://www.amazon.com/Beyond-The-Underworld-ebook/dp/B00BATBPCW It's priced at $5.99, the story really get's going by about chapter 2 and isn't the easiest to get into (I've been told) but when it does you'll be buzzed along into another world...
by Rider
Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:48 am
Forum: Entertainment Zone
Topic: Just finished my First Book! 'Beyond The Underworld'
Replies: 24
Views: 1573

Beyond The Underworld

This is an Adventure Sci-Fi book I wrote, just got it published on Amazon Kindle. It's a bit difficult to get into and isn't high-brow stuff. However if you like a buzzy, pulp yarn of an adventure tale you might just like this :) Beyond The Underworld By Tyler Danann Copyright 2013 by Tyler Danann A...
by Rider
Tue Feb 05, 2013 5:10 pm
Forum: Motoring
Topic: The bikers thread; trips, news, chat, all things motorcycle
Replies: 670
Views: 79678

Re: Biking tips

Good turn-out Buksida :) Anyone attempted a two-wheeled visa-run to Ranong? I might have to venture down in 1 week. Cheers, GN. Yes. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Fw3kWtOTwg http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gOL295qpqb0 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15YMvIhZvb0 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ub16p-...